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Tuesday, April 9, 2019

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Beach


On Monday my mum, dad, brothers, cousins and my auntie and uncle and friends.
When we got there my cousin and friend went to the park after woods we went back and
we started to play games. The games were tug of war and a hula hoop game then the little kids.
went and swim we were all just swimming.

Then the adults came into the water then the adults and the teenagers and some of the kids went
very far but the kids had these floats. I couldn’t go that far so i just stayed with my cousins then
my brother and cousin were playing with a hula hoop we put the hula hoop in the water then we
go under water through the hula hoop. Then I got really cold and I went out to go change
after my cousin and I went to the park with my cousin when we got there we met a friend.
We were all got on the swing and started swinging then we went to go back to the family.
When we got there we started eating chips

then everybody came out and went change my cousin didn’t want to come so he just stayed.
My cousin keeps telling him to come but he wouldn’t come when he came he was sunburned
some people were laughing at him after the adults and teenagers and some kids decided
to go play touch.

Then we all went First my brother got a lolly it was called Hershey kisses then I got a ice block
soon we were packing up finally we went to the car and went home.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Moala this is Briana. How is nana sivi is she ok. I like to go to the beach too. I like how you put full stops in the right place. I hope you have a good holiday.

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