Bailey Road
On Thursday some people went to change. In our sports gear because we had to go Bailey Road. When the bell rang the parents were deciding who to go with.When the parents done deciding,the rest went in the sacred heart college van.
When we got there Mr slade said when you come first you will get a Red ice-block stick, if you come second you will get a orange ice-block stick, if you come third you will get a yellow ice-block stick after that we went outside.
After the year three girls and boys race, the boys went first. After that the girls went.Then we were all done.
The parents were diciding again When they were all done the people who went with Mr Gaffney had frozen.
Soft drinks, and we stopped at Mc ‘Donald’s and a person Laki,my big brother told Mr Gaffeny how to do an order because Mr Gaffeny does not know how to do it. Then we got frozen watermelon flavored drinks finally went back to school. We went into the hall we didn’t want to share. Our drinks with others.
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