Narrative Writing Story

                        Narrative Writing

Rose and her family went to the beach. It was the hottest day of the week, maybe the hottest day of the year! Everyone was going to spend their day playing in the water and introducing themselves to the other neighbours. Rose was having a good time playing with her little niece in the sand. When Rose’s little niece said she needed to use the bathroom. Before Rose went she asked her mum, her mum said “yes, but hurry back because we are about to have lunch.”

While Rose was waiting for her niece to use the bathroom everything turned pitch black. Rose woke up at the beach but no one was there. She had a headache so she just lay there. This blurry image of two people like a middle aged couple went to her and helped her up. The couple said that they were Rose’s parents. Rose couldn’t remember much because something hit her head really hard. Since Rose was the wealthiest person in her street the couple knew how to convince her that they were her parents. The couple knew her name and Rose thought they were her actual parents.

Although Rose doesn’t remember, this has happened to her many times before, but it never got this far. You see Rose’s parents are the wealthiest people in her street. Maybe even the whole city.  Many people have wanted to abduct her for a chunk of her family’s fortune.

The couple took really good care of Rose. Until the couple asked about Rose’s bank details. Rose didn’t trust them because she thought that her parents already knew her Bank details. Rose was on her way to school when suddenly this girl came running to Rose and hugged her. Rose was confused why this strange girl hugged her. The girl said she was Rose’s best friend from a long time ago, her name is Ava and she has long ginger hair. Ava said that Rose has been missing for seven months.

Rose was shocked, she explained to Ava about the middle aged couple and about how she woke up at the beach. Ava said a couple kidnapped a child and that child was Rose. When Rose got home from school she decided that she wasn’t going to tell her parents. Before they do something bad to Rose.

Rose decided to search about the missing girl and saw that it was Rose that has been missing. Rose thought of an idea. Rose called the police saying she's been kidnapped then went to her parents and confronted them that she knows she's been kidnapped. Rose’s mum was crying while her dad was making her feel better, when Rose turned her back on them they suddenly took her on the arm and took her to the basement.

While Rose was in the basement tied up she waited to hear the police knock on the door, when finally they knocked. Rose’s mum opened the door and she saw that it was the police and knew that Rose was the one who called them. The police asked if there was a person called Rose there, and of course the mum said no. The police knew she was lying so they burst in and started looking for Rose.

Once the police checked the whole house he went into  the basement and searched for Rose. The police officer saw Rose tied up at the back and untied her. Rose and the police officer went upstairs. Rose saw her fake parents tied up. Rose went with the police officer to go to her parents.

Rose’s real parents were very happy to see Rose. Since it has been happening for a lot of time, they decided to move to another country and change their names. Dye their hair to make them look so different. They also made sure no one knew they were rich.